Original Art Sundays # 31:revision: A Private Myth, p. 7

Well, finally got the scan done. Looks like the new Alvin tech markers are the short-term answer to my scanning woes, though I may take a friend's advice and go to the disposable tech pen.
Still need more darks!
Ahem.
The page:

 

Not mad for that last tier. The middle  tier is doing what I want it to, but it may seem ambiguous until more of the plot is revealed.

I'm using the old form of overlapping multiple plot elements, all revolving around the central character. Reed Waller and Kate Worley were/are Zen masters of this process/style in their work on Omaha.

On Sunday: page 8.